9.25.2007

Oceans and Roses

I am like a rose,
Still tightly closed,
Waiting for the sun
To smile down
And convince me
To blossom.

I am like the ocean,
With many depths,
Many layers.
One alone is not me,
You must explore them all
To truly find me.

2 comments:

.//blog said...

interesting

still tightly closed

none

the other one

Michelle said...

1) I believe this poem represents both the metahorical an dliteral meaning of a rose and an ocean.

2) I really like the "One alone is not me," line, it's really meaninful and can mean many different things.

3) I don't like the "You must explore them all to truely find me" line the best, it's kinda confusing in the meaning.