Burning sparks fly up
With each hammer there's more
Magic fills the air
The forge is white hot
The Elven blacksmith precise
The product, perfect
A dagger of glass
Bluer still than sky or sea
Made to match thine eyes
May it be defense
Against all dangers you meet
In the times to come
This blessing for you
Comes from he that loves you most
Though you'll never know
Now go.
About Me
- Bethany Joy
- I like to read, sing, dance, play guitar, and play frisbee...all at the same time!!! Also trying new things (usually)! and meeting new people! Welcome :)
5 comments:
I think this poem is about love. I think the person loves somebody relly and very much, but the person don't know about this love. The best line in my opinion is "Magic fills the air". I have no idea what could be better I love this poem!!!!!!!!
Nice image
the first 3 lines
none
this one
1) I think this poem seems like it's just like when forging a dagger and when forging a love.
2) "The forge is so hot The Elven blacksmith precise The product, perfect.
Is it me, or is this poem a nod to Lotr of the Rings?
3) I really like it, but the "this blessing for you" line doesn't go the best with the rest of the poem.
4) I like this poem the best.
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